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The legend of Deplor

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Genre: Fantasy

Type: Novel

Rating: 13+

Scribe Master:JesseZ7

Description: 2 middle aged men and 1 middle aged girl, set out to do there annual hiking trip, they do this every year and can barely wait to get going, but as they get to the area witch they hike and go to set up camp they realise that there families arn't even there yet, so they decide to go for a walk and hopefully when they get back they will be there, but there walk turned out to be forever, as there facing a new surrounding witch no one has ever witnessed before, will they make it back into time to face reality again, or will they be trapped for 1000 years to come.

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Chapter 1

the hike

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Chapter 2

Welcome to Deplor

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Annie stared out the window as the truck weeved down the bumpy road, God when are we leaving she had said too herself. She ran into the kitchen and sat on a bar stool witch was right next to Jacob. She looked at him with her big blue puppy dog eyes, What do u want Annie? laughed jacob as she stared him down,

Annie had long blond hair, big blue eyes, a wonderfull body type, And had just hit twenty two, Yes yes smiled Jacob were leaving just as soon as i can... and just before he could say anymore he droped a plate, God yelled Jacob thats the second one in ten minutes. Im not washing the dishes no more, Mums going to kill me.

Jacob had short blond hair, big brown eyes, and a buff body type, Annie and Jacob are brother and sister. God yelled Annie your such a baby. She followed him into the lounge room and sat next to him on the couch.

My god groaned Jacob i wish Sam would hurry up and get here. Mum and every one are already waiting at the camp site. But before he could say anymore he heard Sams car pull up.

Sam was twenty four years of age, normal size, long black hair, blue eyes, and has glasses. Finally Jacob yelled as he stormed out the door. What took you so long. What took me so long moaned Sam, ask the stupid bus driver who decides to crash in the middle of the highway.

Annie giggled, in the background, Picked up her stuff from in front of the door, And jumped into the front seat of Sams car, no way smirked Jacob im in the front seat. God whispered Annie with her arms crossed. And didnt say anything and jumped into the back. Jacob ran inside picked up his belongings and jumped into the car.

The road was very bumpy and every one kept going up and down off there seats as they hit a bump. Peering out the window was Annie, And everytime they went up a bump she would hit her head on the roof. Err she screamed we should have taken my car instead she frowned. Sam replied with a bothered look on his face as he turned around. Yer well he said atleast I can drive a car, Whats that supose to mean laughed Annie. Im just saying laughed Sam, Girls cant drive very well.

Then they started to scruff around and yell, until jacob yelled almost at the top of his voice, SHUTUP!!!!!!. Then with in a split second every one stopped. Thank you replied Jacob your supose to be driving.

Annie crossed her arms in anger. And didnt say anything for the rest of the three and a half hour trip.

Annie hopped out of the car and streched her legs. Finally she yawned we are at last here.

Wow complemented Sam it looks a lot different then last year. Jacob hopped out with a frown. What the hell is going on here he yelled softly. The trees looked all grey the grass was dying and you couldnt her any birds singing. And whats that awfull smell Said Annie as she covered her nose. Oh yer said Sam sorry that was me. Annie slapped him on the shoulder and started to grab her belongings.

Dead trees and Dying grass, was all they saw through the hiking trails. Was it like this last year asked Sam because i dont remeber it being like this.
Yes i no replied Jacob in an intregued voice, this is by far the strangest it has ever looked in the seven years we have been coming here. I cant even recognise it laughed Annie.

Geese she remembered were's mum and dad, i didnt see there car out the front. Yer your right replied Sam, Maybe they parked it up the back.

Annie nodded in agreement. This still doesnt fell right. Your right this is too strange smirked Sam eviley.

Wait a second, Weres Jacob yelled Annie.

Jacob, Jacob , JACOB!!!!!. it's no use frowned Annie. listen said Sam, he's probably just playing a sick joke on us. This isnt funny Jacob yelled Sam.
Dont worry about it too much Annie he will probably turn up when hes least ecspected. Ha i never said i was worried, but i cant turn up to mum and dad without Jacob.

Good point laughed Sam. They walked on for a while with no trace of Jacob. at this stage Annie was starting too get a little worried. Ok this isn't a joke any more yelled Annie, come out you prick. yet there was still no answer.

Listen here whispered Sam, what we will do is we'll go to the camp grounds and tell your parence that he is missing. Annie turned to Sam with an uneasy look, Yer ok she replied but! what iff they are not there either?

They will be he smiles. Ok well hopefully they are replied Annie, But the tress and the grass doesn't look normal she insisted.

Oh my god were is everyone yelled Annie. no one is here, were is my dad, were is my mum, my aunty. No one is here, god im going crazy she snickered.
Ok guys she yelled; very funny. But she soon realised this was not a joke.

Dont worry about it Annie, im sure they will be here soon. Yer but what about Jacob she replied; what happen to him. Maybe he is out there looking for us, just like were looking for him laughed Sam.

Something is wrong she cried, He would not just dissapear like this.
Im calling the cops she insisted. No!!! yelled Sam, he will turn up, Jacob has only been missing for an hour at the most.

Give me phone Annie. Annie handed the phone slowely to Sam. Now lets pick up our stuff and walk this way, Sam pointed to his right too a little old dead grass trail.

I'm sitting down now winged Annie. No yelled Sam!! do you want to find your brother or not. She finally got back up and started to walk again. She dropped her bag onto the ground and got out a water bottle. Then she realised a scrunched up piece of paper on the ground. Hey wait she yelled, What is it now replied Sam. look at this.

She picked up the piece of paper and unscrunched it, it reads.

Dear Sam and Annie, you are probably wondering were i have been for the past two years. That im sorry i cannot explain too you because however it is a little hard to. Iff i do see you again i will probably not remeber you, I may or may not see you again. it depends iff i can make it back in time. iff i dnt make it back in 5 years i wont be seeing you again. please take care of my sister sam. Yours sincerly Jacob.

Annie looked up with a shock on he face, as iff her brother has gone mental.And then with out even take a single breath she yells!!! HAS HE GONE INSANE. Two years, two years. Is this some sick Joke Yells Sam, Jacob Were are you!!! its not funny anymore. yet there's still no answer.

what's he doing to me frowned Annie, is he trying to get me to ring the police. Come one Annie get up, We'll find him i swear. She got up slowely and put her back pack on.

They walked for hours with no sign of Jacob. I got an idea screamed Annie in suprise, He might be up in the mountains. I doubt it replied Sam, but we have searched all through here, so i guess we might as well. They headed towards the tall mountains, and started to climb up.

Annie could hear Sam's loud breathing next too her, She just had a look then looked back and shook it off.

Ok Puffed Sam its getting too dark, we have to take shelter for the night. Were replied Annie. Well smirked Sam im pretty sure i can see a cave opening just up a bit farther, maybe on hundred too two hundred metres. Oh yer i see she smirked too.

Well laughed Sam its not much but it will have to do, They started to unpack a tent, And sleeping material.

A few hours past and a fire had itself going pretty well. why whispered Annie,
Why did he have to dissapear, Why does nothing make any sense, Sam she whispered are you still a wake. all she heard was a groan that was implying that he was sleeping. She just snickered and lay down on her pillow inside her tent.
She fell sleep for a few hours, but then it started to rain and thunder really heavy. SAM!!!! yelled Annie, get up. She felt her shirt and pants starting to soak. Oh no she cried its coming in. SAM!!!! SAM!!!!. WHAT IS IT ANNIE. Look she insisted .
Sams eyes brightened up. Ok we have to get out he yelled or we are going to drown. He looked out side of the cave doorway, ok He cried were not going to be able to get out of here, we will drown. The water out side of the cave was like a completely new river.

Alright yelled Sam we have to run towards the back of the cave. They left everything there and started to run. The water was coming in from every were. Even little barely noticeable cracks in the cave were still watering up.

God yelled Annie, this was not the safest spot to camp, she snickered a little but then they had to keep running so they lowered the risk of drowning. they eventually reached the back of the cave, And things were alot calmer back here.

They took a few deep breaths and sat on two rocks that were next to each other. So what now laughed Annie, this is completely the back of the cave. Iff water comes in there is no way out now. Dont worry Said Sam, bye the time the water reaches this far the rain would have already stopped.

She shrugged her shoulders and put her hands on her chin. But then she pooped up and insisted that there was a way out. She ran her fingers up and down the walls, as iff she was feeling around for something,

God nothing she sat back down on her rock. And sam got up and stared blankly at the back of the cave. What is it laughed Annie. Look he said.

The walls are pealing through and i can see some like on the other side. She looked up and her eyes widened. You right she yelled. They both started to peel at the wall.

Then with a sudden. A blue light apeared from the caves wall, Like they had activated something. Oh my god yelled Annie wat is this. But before they could say another word. The blue light sucked them in so quick they couldn't even blink.






















































































































































































































































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clouds of dust filled the air, Everything trembling, and feelings of uneasy fell upon the two as they were unconcious laying on the ground. Annie awoke first, she sat up and looked around, though it was hard to see because the dust had not settled yet.

She was just about to see iff Sam was awake yet, but as she turned around he was already sitting up next too her, looking, just sitting there looking blankly. Sam! yelled Annie, Do u have any clue were we are. A tear drop fell from Sam's eye. I dont no he replied, But i dont think were in kansas anymore. Annie giggled, but then she got serious again, and yelled this is no time to joke.

Sam was first to stand up. Then Annie followed. When is this dust going to settle she commented. I dont think it is setteling replied Sam, I think we have found our self in a dust storm of some sort.

They started to walk through the dust, Atleast the trembling stopped.

They pushed on for miles, Well at least for them it felt like miles, walking through dust not knowing were you are heading.

They kept pushing on for miles too come until they could finally start seeing the dust clearing. It looks like we are in a middle of a desert Yelled Annie.

The dust had fully settled now, and boy was she wrong, the desert turned out to be a forest of some sort. Tress were green, grass was beautifull, and birds sang in happiness. My god where are we smiled Sam.

like i said not in kansas, Annie looked at sam and replied, not in kansas, I doubt were even on earth anymore.
She picked a leaf off a tree and it was almost bigger then her. Wow laughed Sam this must just be a bad dream or something.

They kept walking through this huge rainforest, with nothing human in site.
Look yelled Sam! Water, they both were so thirsty at this point, they bolted over to get a drink of fresh river water.
But as they reached it they realised this was not normal water. Annie dunked her hands in, Ew she cried this isn't water at all, but some sort of jelly. She pulled her hand out cuped, And then open a hole in her hand, and it just blobed out of her hand.

This isn't right she complained. Nothing is right in this place. But before she could say another word, A flash of somthing in the right corner of her eye had got her attention. What was that? What replied Sam, what was what?
Never mind she said, lets keep moving.

Where do we go asked Sam, this water is blocking the way. the water crossed through there whole trail, i guess we have to go through said Annie. Sam jumped straight in with out thinking twice, Come on Annie yelled Sam, she looked at the water, with her wide open eyes.

She finally jumped in and started to follow Sam through. Come on Annie hurry. Im going as fast as i can She yelled back towards him.
What was that!!!, Whats wrong asked Sam, I swear i just felt something go between my legs replied Annie.

Oh my god there is goes again! she yelled. Quick!. they started to go through even quicker now. But its a bit hard to run through jelly water. They were going as quick as they could. Run, Run, Annie yelled.

They kept moving as fast as they could.
They finally reached the other end, grabbed onto the sides and pulled them selves up. They both lay onto there backs, and started to huff and puff. What was it asked Sam, I dont know replied Annie.










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