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Antithesis

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Genre: Literary Fiction

Type: Short Story

Rating: N/A

Scribe Master:Anti

Description: Short pieces born from prompts and boredom. Barely given more than a mechanical edit, what you shall read are the unaltered thoughts and feelings floating in my head at the time of writing.

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Chapter 1

Nereid

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Chapter 2

Mathematics

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Chapter 3

Letter from the Government

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Have you ever seen someone dance in the rain? I haven’t. Maybe it is just something for the movies. I would like to, someday before I walk into the light, see someone dance in the rain. I don’t mean a quick jive and shuffle. I want to see flowing movements. I want to see grace. I want to see someone move with enough fluidity to mimic the water falling all around them. If I were to picture the scene in my head I would imagine a summer rain. Big, fat, warm droplets that make a person contemplate taking a walk. The sound of these droplets is different. This is no aggressive winter sleet or furious tropical gale. There is a subtlety to the rain. Each drop is like a musical note. The sound comes out soft and lingers in one’s ear for only a few moments before departing. Individually each note is pleasant, but not pleasing. Together they form a symphony that urges one to move. The clouds above have been waiting like eager children for the sun to settle in for the night to begin their song. The drops fall in nervous spurts at first. Their imprints vanish like footprints in the sand. Slowly the clouds develop confidence. The droplets begin to fall with purpose, splashing into the world like mini aqua-cannonballs. CHARGE! The orchestrators above are bellowing. Soon the landscape is wet and heavy, high off the scent of fresh rainwater.

The earth is content to absorb all that brother sky has felt generous enough to give. Indeed, most people are content to absorb the rain. I’d like to picture someone who isn’t so passive. A woman. Tallish, twentyish, wearing a white dress as light and comfortable as the air outside. Her black hair is long enough to reach past her shoulders. She is in a far away corner of her house, curled up in a big squashy chair in an impossibly feline manner. A book rests in her hand but she isn’t reading the words on the page. The constant pitter-patter against the windowpanes makes her restless. Something about the rain fall calls her, compels her to move. She walks out of her house and stands at the edge of the hair thin space where her roof no longer blocks the sky. A gentle gust brings a fine spray of water to tickle her face. She accepts the invitation and steps onto her lawn. The ground is warm and spongy beneath her bare feet. She looks to the sky which is an amalgamation of soft blues, purples, and greens. She cannot recall seeing the clouds look quite like that before. They don’t seem to have a basis in this world. The colors are familiar but so remarkably different that they must have sprung forth from the mind of a painter, or better yet, a child. This is summer and it’s beautiful.

Her dance begins with a twirl. Nothing complex, she just spins on one foot and lands. It’s fun. Dancing is fun. The joy people feel in the act of moving arises from the vitality represented in that very movement. I am woman, watch me go she says. One twirl multiplies into dozens and before long she is in a full blown dance. I don’t know much about the art but I do know when dance is rehearsed and drilled into a body. This is no routine. The movements spring from within that space we go to when we are alone in our rooms dancing to the beat of whatever is flowing through our veins. Her hair is soaked through enough to cling to her cheeks in crescents until the moment she decides to spin her head, flinging out droplets in a watery halo. She is nothing but long limbs and graceful motion. Her internal dialogue has been replaced with rain-song and the minutes she spends dancing are heaven. Exhausted but exhilarated she leans against the sole tree in her yard. Droplets of rain play across her face, enticing her to continue dancing.

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I need to mark out a 400m track in my backyard. See, 400 meters is equivalent to 1,312 feet or 15,748 inches. I have to measure with my feet but that is ok. My feet are 11.5 inches long so that means it will take 1,345 steps to walk 400m. I do not want to walk that far barefoot. My backyard is filled with fire ant colonies. Did you know each colony can have anywhere from 10 to 100 queens reproducing at a rate of 1,000 to 1,500 eggs per day? If even one colony has 100 queens I could step on an ant pile with upwards of 150,000 ants. I cannot take that risk. My running shoes are an inch longer than my foot. Instead of 1,345 steps it will take 1,234.24 steps. I do not want to round. The track is broken into four 100m segments so I would lose one step through rounding. To walk 100m I need to take 309.5 steps. Once again I have to be precise. After three trials I concluded that on average I can cover 10 steps in 9.3 seconds. That is 1.08 steps per second. It will take 4.8 minutes to walk 100m so I will finish with the whole project in 19 minutes and 12 seconds. My name is James by the way. I have OCD but I do not let that get in the way of my life. I am too busy with school and track to allow obsessions to distract me.

Well, I am not on a track team right now. I was kicked off. My coach says I have a problem working with other people. Things are better this way. I could not focus while on the team. Besides, my coach was not very good. He never recorded times past the tenth of a second mark during practice. This is the sport of track and field. Races can be determined by less than a thousandth of a second. If a coach is not willing to go the extra mile than why should I? That was a running pun by the way. I said it to my mom. She did not laugh. Anyway, I have to get started. It is currently 4:10. I will be finished with the track at 4:29:12 and I am performing a time trial to see how far I can run in 30 minutes. My mother said she would be home with groceries at 5:00. That leaves me 48 seconds to make it back inside. I doubt my mother will be on time. She, like everyone else, does not pay enough attention to detail.

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The barn had been casting its shadow across that field since before the Japanese bombed Pearl Harbor. It’s standard as far as barns go. Two stories, red, wooden. Simple but well cared for.

Red Salinger looked up at the barn through squinted eyes as the last rays of sunlight began to settle beyond the horizon. He built it with his father back when Jim Crow was the law and when woman could not compete in Olympic events without long skirts. Red was not an educated man but he understood the value of things. Above all else he knew the value of hard work. What a man made with his own hands was his and no one else’s. His ideals sheltered him from the sunlight that threatened to burn his skin during the hours he spent farming the land. Then one day a letter from the government came with the words eminent domain written across the top. What Red believed in did not matter to the White House.

“S’all a crock o’ shit anyhow. This barn is painted in my blood,” Red spat clutching a gas can in his left hand. “I built it, I own it. God’s truth. Well? Did ya hear me?” he said stepping into the barn carefully. “Did ya Mary? Ah hell. Ya never have nothin’ to say.”

Mary had not said anything for nineteen years but she always listened. Red could count on that. He plopped down onto a bale of hay, tapping the gas can against his leg, starring into the fading light. The lines around his blue eyes were crinkled like potato chips and filled with dust. Strands of white hair clung to his head so loosely that any slight movement threatened to knock them off. His smile was all gums except for a few choice teeth that had endured the years. He sat straight and proud. The weight of life had never proved too much for Red’s shoulders. Still, he tapped that gas can against his leg as regular as a heartbeat.

“S’ma barn. Mine. They cain’t take it. A man deserves what he makes from the sweat of his brow,” he muttered into the encroaching darkness. Once again Mary did not answer but she was listening. “I ain’t had much but I got this,” he gestured around. “And they cain’t take it from me.”

Outside a crow could be heard ushering in the night. The final rays of golden light bathed the grass outside creating a field of amber swaying with the breeze. Mary was already at rest but Red still sat on that hay bale tapping. The weight of the matchbox in his right pocket was growing heavier every moment.

“They cain’t have what ain’t there. If Bush wants this barn so bad he can have ashes. Don’ be like that Mary. I know its home but… things change. I’m sorry.”

Red reached into his pocket and withdrew the matchbox. He struck a match and held it in a shaking hand. The flame did not waver but stood out clearly like a star in the night sky. That pinpoint of light illuminated what it was Red was trying to see in the darkness. He took the letter from his pocket and brought it to the flame and watched as the corner curled and blackened. Red held the letter long enough to see eminent domain burn away before letting the rest fall to the ground. The embers singed the hay on the barn floor looking to consume more but Red’s boot stamped the ground hard. He turned his back leaving the gas can and matchbox at the hay bale.

“Wouldn’ be right ta do it Mary. I’ll get us some place nice first. We got the right. Uncle Sam cain’t claim that.” Red said walking out of the barn, taking special care to not tread on his wife’s grave.

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